Practicing active

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My writing professor brother had a chance to send me some insight into effective blog writing. Some of the examples in the included essays flew over my head but there are a few areas I plan to work on. Use of the passive tense can be a detriment to the clarity of any message. A practice in active:

The Temper Trap gets ready for a night out in “Fader” via Where It Starts, It Ends…

Simian Mobile Disco labors through “I Believe” via Not Many Experts

The Diogenes Club reaches out of the shadows in “The Ageless“. They did not know what they were doing. Via We Are Binary.

Koushik sits comfortably and quietly next to “In Green Space” via Analog Giant.

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